BlackNWhiteDog
Joined: Feb 05, 2006
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May 25, 2007 - 10:12 |
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JanMattys
Joined: Feb 29, 2004
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May 25, 2007 - 10:27 |
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May I suggest something like a fang-shaped cut in a corner of the banner? Something like a hint to reptiles.
The general feeling of the banner is great, anyway, so I'm not asking for a remake... just an add-on, as little as you fancy. |
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BlackNWhiteDog
Joined: Feb 05, 2006
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May 26, 2007 - 21:17 |
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Trog
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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May 26, 2007 - 21:31 |
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BlackNWhiteDog
Joined: Feb 05, 2006
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May 26, 2007 - 21:40 |
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Rijssiej
Joined: Jan 04, 2005
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May 26, 2007 - 21:42 |
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Sziro
Joined: May 07, 2005
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May 26, 2007 - 21:43 |
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The one, where the lizard is on the right rocks!
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Malthor
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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May 26, 2007 - 22:08 |
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I thought the first draft banners were fantastic. We don't need Godzilla (or the shadow of someone's dinosaur toy) trampling through your great artwork |
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Mezir
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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May 26, 2007 - 22:29 |
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Malthor wrote: | I thought the first draft banners were fantastic. We don't need Godzilla (or the shadow of someone's dinosaur toy) trampling through your great artwork |
Agreed, but keep the second layer of jungle! Great work. |
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Gran
Joined: Jul 07, 2005
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May 26, 2007 - 22:31 |
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Seconds Mezir! |
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BlackNWhiteDog
Joined: Feb 05, 2006
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May 26, 2007 - 23:16 |
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JanMattys
Joined: Feb 29, 2004
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May 26, 2007 - 23:40 |
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My hints:
1- The "s" looking like a snake is nice, but it doesn't have to look so much like a letter. Just write "L U T R I A" and then add some snake to make the S, or make the S less similar to the rest of the word.
As for the silhouette, I like the last one the best, but I think it could do just fine without it, if you make the snake of the S nice enough |
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Malthor
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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May 27, 2007 - 06:14 |
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This silhouette is better than the earlier ones. I am still unsure that a Saurus Warrior with a sword/club is the right image though. If this was a WHFB tourney, then yes.
As it is a Bloodbowl tournament, a silhouette of a mage priest or someone holding a staff might be more appropriate. Teams are coming to play at the invitation of the mysterious mage priests, not coming to get their heads lopped off by crazed Saurus Warriors Just what I think when I look at the silhouette anyway.
I think the extra layer of jungle foliage looks nice, but would make it more of an abandoned temple (where the jungle is growing back) than a currently used temple which would have cleared areas around so the Lizzies could congregate and watch the sacrifices etc at the top.
Still, great work and I appreciate you helping out on this Nick. |
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Malthor
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Jun 02, 2007 - 19:39 |
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Markusen has been working on the icons. First draft is here. I have asked if he can make the yellow areas a bone/ivory colour and also to embelish the chest plate with a gem or glowing rune.
http://www.realhp.de/members/aknub/Lizzard_Temple_Guardian_Champ.html |
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SnakeSanders
Joined: Aug 02, 2003
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Jun 02, 2007 - 19:58 |
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whats the icon for? do you get a free player lizard dude if you win? |
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