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2013-05-23 23:21:38
10 votes, rating 3.2
10 votes, rating 3.2
Rage Against The Client
***Lyric Fail removed due too... Fail***
So in this game Was supposed to be my rise to Smack Finalz!!! And it may have been too if i had played consistently. Mihme did a great job all around and the dice beginning second half were epically bad on both fronts.
I just wish I had started my brain the beginning of first half. That i had covered the ball like i should of in OT... Blah.
One day i'll play an entire game properly! PROMISES!
So in this game Was supposed to be my rise to Smack Finalz!!! And it may have been too if i had played consistently. Mihme did a great job all around and the dice beginning second half were epically bad on both fronts.
I just wish I had started my brain the beginning of first half. That i had covered the ball like i should of in OT... Blah.
One day i'll play an entire game properly! PROMISES!
So in this game Was supposed to be my rise to Smack Finalz!!! And it may have been too if i had played consistently. Mihme did a great job all around and the dice beginning second half were epically bad on both fronts.
I just wish I had started my brain the beginning of first half. That i had covered the ball like i should of in OT... Blah.
One day i'll play an entire game properly! PROMISES!
So in this game Was supposed to be my rise to Smack Finalz!!! And it may have been too if i had played consistently. Mihme did a great job all around and the dice beginning second half were epically bad on both fronts.
I just wish I had started my brain the beginning of first half. That i had covered the ball like i should of in OT... Blah.
One day i'll play an entire game properly! PROMISES!
Comments
Posted by the_Sage on 2013-05-23 23:38:20
Started off strong. Last line needs work.
Posted by oryx on 2013-05-24 02:26:05
[i]When speaking of dice
no need to speak twice -
we all get screwed so hard that it's lewd
and the best you can do is lather on lube
to block with no block,
to go nude with no sock;
you're inviting the ire of forces most dire
you're laying out sticks for your funeral pyre.
So say, "I will not
tempt Nuffle a lot!"
Take extra time to design your design...
and also rewrite the last line of your rhyme. [/i]
no need to speak twice -
we all get screwed so hard that it's lewd
and the best you can do is lather on lube
to block with no block,
to go nude with no sock;
you're inviting the ire of forces most dire
you're laying out sticks for your funeral pyre.
So say, "I will not
tempt Nuffle a lot!"
Take extra time to design your design...
and also rewrite the last line of your rhyme. [/i]
Posted by Chainsaw on 2013-05-24 09:19:59
Should HAVE
Should "of" is illiterate nonsense that is a misinterpretation of should've.
Should "of" is illiterate nonsense that is a misinterpretation of should've.
Posted by oryx on 2013-05-24 15:36:00
Don't remove it silly, just make it better =D
Posted by ledo on 2013-07-29 15:38:54
http://www.upworthy.com/stephen-fry-takes-a-firm-stance-on-grammar-he-doesnt-go-the-way-youd-think-2
For you, chainsaw.
For you, chainsaw.